First Draft of DPS & Feedback
Add page numbers, pg.12 and 13 as this is what is on the contents page, to make the magazine more authentic.
Put my magazine identity at the bottom of each page and near the page numbers so it's more realistic.
Good use of design elements in the corner. Creates a consistent house style in my magazine.
Make pull-quote a bit more bigger so it is even more eye-catching.
Blood splatters make it conform the genre of Grime. Could be more opaque so a more subtle effect?
Nice pull quote that fits nicely around the quote. Maybe make it more bold so that it stands out even more?
Add magazine website so more identity.
Make drop caps more bigger?
Make the GR!ME smaller?
'Earnesty' could be made a bit bigger?
Nice pull quote that fits nicely around the quote. Maybe make it more bold so that it stands out even more?
Add page numbers, pg.10 and 11 as this is my first double page spread.
Add a magazine identity, the magazine title in the corners.
Put something at the end of the introductory paragraph- read on to find out more.. Add arrows to make it more authentic.
Nice effect of the writing of the date and time. Gives the photo a vintage, underground effect that is connected to Grime.
The super-imposement of the title works really well.
The use of a handwritten font looks really authentic across the two double page spreads. Give the DPS a personal look.
The use of a handwritten font looks really authentic across the two double page spreads. Give the DPS a personal look.
Text gives simple but effective introduction to the DPS. Drop cap is consistent design element.