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Front Page: First Draft & Feedback
After receiving feedback from all my classmates about what went well and what I could improve on my first draft on the front page, I was made aware of some improvements I could make.
Change the colour of 'issue 16' as it can't be seen on the dark background. Perhaps change it to white; therefore vivd and still fits into my colour scheme.
Use a pull quote here instead of this cover line. Therefore it can make it more intriguing and let readers know what will be inside.
Make this writing a bit smaller so there is more attention on the main cover line.
Use a pull quote here instead of this cover line. Therefore it can make it more intriguing and let readers know what will be inside.
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